They wobble, but they don't fall down. I liked the idea, and good execution of the old silent movie thing. Although the storyline progressed rather slow, it was still kinda cute.
yeah its slow, i dont know about cute, but thanks :)
It held my attention
I liked it, it obviously took some work, and I liked the music selection. Well done.
It was alright
The subject matter was pretty cute, and it's obvious that you put a lot of time into timing everything out to the music so I gave you some style points with that. There were some rough patches in the animation, and the music had a few rough spots too, but keep up the work!
That was quite the stroll down memory lane. Hehhe the only thing worse than that is the scrambled screen an NES game gets when you havent played it in a while, and you forgot to clean it ghetto style (i.e. blowing in it).
And yes, I thank you for those bitter memories!
Keep up the good work!
It was a jab at humor
I see that the head used for the DBZ movies was reused in a character for this flick. Kind of bathroom humor may appeal to some, but the song at the end was kind of unclear, and I had to listen to it two or three times to hear the full thing, so it wasnt really that funny. Perhaps if you were to have a "sing-along" thing at the bottom that had a bouncing poo to go along with the words it could add some points to the humor. Keep it up, and I hope the preloader problem has been resolved.
It was alright.
I have to give you credit for the ghostbusters midi, but other than that, the simple halloween gif files just made the movie look like it was a geocities website. I dont really understand the meaning behind the text that scrolled through, and this seemed more like a teaser or a trailer for a real movie. I see that you submitted this around halloween so that makes sense, but if you are looking for good criticism, all I can tell you is that if you are going to use animated gifs in a movie, make the movie have a storyline. It was a good effort towards a movie, but a little more work needs to go into the creation of a storyline. Keep up the work, and you will get it some day :)
For one thing, the majority of your movies are DBZ movies.
so from that you will get one of two things.
DBZ fans voting on your movies, or DBZ haters voting on your movies. The same applies to making a stick movie, or even a clock movie. There are people who like certain things, and if you choose to make a movie on a pre-made topic, prepare to have a mix of hate/like. The only way to have a nonbiased mix of people reviewing your movies is to make up a new cartoon, make new characters, and make something happen with them. Using DBZ limits you, as does making a clock movie. If you dont like hardcore DBZ haters voting 0 on your movies, dont make a DBZ movie, it is simple as that. And I dont understand why you have a gripe animated through a DBZ character, and all of a sudden you get a 3.25+ from 62 assorted people. SO this proves your point that people will vote on all sorts of random crap, even if it isnt terribly good. I personally havent watched any of your other movies, so I will go check those out now. But if you want my humble opinion, if you make DBZ movies, be prepared to suffer people giving you bad reviews. Hell, I am pretty sure some people bad reviews to get into movies. The Anti-clocks for example, I am sure there are some out there that want to be like Ki1o, and get into a movie based on being a jackass to clocks, just so they can say.. "Hey look at me, I am in a movie on NG!" (take ThorFalcon in "Parody of se7en" for example, although that wasn't his intention).. well, I think I am on a tangent now, so I will just leave it at that. But you aren't alone.. don't complain about a harsh and unforgiving portal.
Hehehe that was quite funny.
The best part was the spontaneous battle music. Hmmm Magic cards, I certainly look forward to the next episode. Keep it up!
That was really good. Keep up the work Tomatoclock, and dont forget our deal ;).
Ahh... that was great. Thank you for making my day complete. LOL.. I like the yeb.
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